Paralyzed Haiku

Paralyzed Haiku

A Poem by The Nude Writer
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Short on time. Full of "feeling"

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I can't feel my legs
No more pain, no more feeling
Floating on numbness

© 2016 The Nude Writer



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The Nude Writer
I could write more. And will.

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So saddly beautiful. I cant imagine

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Zoe
Your lines really compliment a Haiku!
Excellent use of words....

Posted 11 Months Ago


The Nude Writer

11 Months Ago

Thanks Zoe! :)
Zoe

11 Months Ago

U'r welcome!
Short, yet packs a powerful punch. Straight & to the point. I enjoy the thought of it being both physical & mental sense of being paralyzed. Very creative, also quite haunting. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thanks Svetlana :) I'm always glad when you review my writing :)
very well penned, cheers......

Posted 1 Year Ago


I read this like your thoughts were suspended, cut off from the outside world but that's just me!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A great piece of work.
Good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Quite brilliant I like this

Posted 1 Year Ago


The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Oh thank you! :)
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"Floating on numbness" stellar line.
Exceptionally measured poetic expression. Starz

Posted 1 Year Ago


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The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thanks Starz :)
The connection between the title and the feelings conveyed in the piece are very smartly expressed.
Regards Ray

Posted 1 Year Ago


this is very powerful and a part of your life now great words


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

Thanks love :)
Lover Of Words

1 Year Ago

My pleasure hope your doing well :)
The Nude Writer

1 Year Ago

I'm quite well :) Message me. We can chat more

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Added on August 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 2, 2016
Tags: Disability, paralyzed, wheelchair

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The Nude Writer
The Nude Writer

Romania



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I am a proud nudist and writer. I live naked and my spirit is naked to the world. I don't hide much and tell it like it is. I write about the human body, nudism, being a woman and other topics. .. more..

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