You In Another

Don't you know how beautiful you are?

In the things you do?

In the things you say?

The way you don't stare?

Someday I hope to meet you

In someone else

Who I can love forever

Beautiful like you

Reviews

[J. Atkinson]

I like how the first stanza is all questions, whereas the second is more of a statement. Nicely done. :)

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Thank you! I didn't even realise I had done that, but now that read it again, it does add a nice contrast.