A Broken Love

Destiny calls us
together in fate
destiny destroyed us
with one word
hate!
And sometimes
i can't control
myself
and sometimes
I can't control
the darkness
It consumes me
and abuses me
this darkness
know my
weakness

IT'S YOU!!

If you don't run
I'll kill you
if you stay
I'll kill you

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot a very interesting read and very well expressed... nice work!!!

[Rasha]

Interesting piece!!
I loed it x

[Jeff Miller]

Interesting piece! I enjoyed it very much, and seemed like it could be something in an actual story, or a movie. Keep it up!

[Buni]

i didnt really get the potential you might have through this poem. its fine but could do with some more thoughts and emotions. seemed a little incomplete to me. looking forward to your other works! keep writing!

[J. Anthony Guerrero]

very interesting. keep writing!