Words Written

Words written

on the wall in crimson

A stunning beauty

ugly with pain

Sharp point meets

soft flesh!

Peircing soft flesh

sliding across

Drawing crimson liquid

to the surface

Tears mixing

as she begins to cry

The pain is overwhelming

but she keeps going

Biting her lip

as she fights back a scream

Drawing more blood

Feeling more pain

The little razor blade

is dirty with regret

Words written

on the walls in crimson

Stunning beauty

ugly with pain.

Reviews

[Calypso]

I enjoyed reading this!

[Terence Foster]

neatly done..super!
love reading your work..absolutely do!

[Sean M. Addams]

liked this alot the imagery in this was great... overall i thought you did an impressive job on this... keep up the great writes..

[Rasha]

EXCELLENT!!
I love it...a lot!!

[Princy]

I love the intensity and the lines "stunning beauty, ugly with pain."

[Star Wolf]

Seeking relief from overwhelming pain or perhaps its numbness and feeling regret after wards. Nicely done and a well written poem, impressive.

[hope.]

"Stunning beauty
ugly with pain."
thats my favorite part aside from the whole thing. very well-written.
you get the point across very well and one can relate to this. :) i love it.

[HorrorMaster]

Very good, I love it.

[Frantzuu]

wow good job, the way you put together the words add to the poem. :)

[Bette]

this is great i like "The little razor blade

is dirty with regret" i hope that this isn't something that you are contemplating. well done