Jesus in a Bathroom

There, on the bathroom wall,
someone had written
"Except Jesus"
in black indelible marker.

I wonder if Jesus would correct his spelling?

I thought what a stroke of genius it was
to advertise Jesus on a wall that you had to look at
for a few minutes every day.

I went back to my desk
and got a red marker,
and wrote above it
" Everybody had a great time at the party..."

I wonder if Jesus would laugh at that?

 

Reviews

[Mistral Bilgera]

Jesus would probably your number one fan! :)

very very clever!
I dunno, but i am inspired by this prose-like poem... i don't think i'm the only one.

[Hedra Helix]

;)

yes, I think he'd laugh a lot actually

and then you'd have to duck the lightning

[Kelly Rainwater]

You make me laugh! (this is a GOOD thing!) Very clever!

[Poeticpiers]

A most amusing little story in well written prose

[Chandra]

Ha ha! This made me chuckle to myself. It reminded me of that joke - if God were a Transformer, what would he be: a Christler or a Jesubishi?

I love what you wrote above it.