Darker Dreams

On being a spiders feast.

Misty
Tendrils
Fog - Ether Zone
I wander here
Lost - Alone
Milky White
Hazy
I cannot see
Yet I know
Spiders are all around me
Webs
Cast from evil entities
Like razor blades
They cut me
Tracery of scars
While the Spiders
Obvious in their deadly webs
Laugh - Laugh -Laugh
I fall
Slipping in my blood
I open my mouth to scream
I have no voice
This is more terrible
Than being alone
The Spiders drop
One by one
From someplace worse than Hell
I see through the fog
Their scarlet eyes
Their black tongues
Hunger for my scarlet essence
I am helpless
Bars of webs
Hold me -I am dead
Drained by Spiders
Within me no life
My glass eyes
See nothing
My voice - Never existed
Now silent
I'd sigh
If I were alive
I'd cry
If somehow I did survive
Victim of Spiders
Slave of reality
I put down my pen
I smile

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Creepy. It's like you where writing about what was happening or perhaps writing about yourself writing this poem.

[Star Wolf]

This freaked me out, I was squirming with this one too. UGH! Spiders!!!!

[deeps]

I enjoyed this one especially the endng. Amazing mystery here.

[Black Cat Fever]

I'm not sure if this actually happening or if someone was dreaming or creating this story. Cool, not really knowing, adds a deeper mystery to the poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Dark indeed... seems deeper than just about spiders though... maybe bout the loss of control. Thanks for sharing.