Love versus True love

I wrote as being a Christian,idk if it offense some of you .please do comment if you have anything to say about this

Love:
Love sometimes is like a nightmare,
Once a heart is broken,
There's always a fear to fall in love again.

A fickle minded person is always a sweet liar ,
with lustful thought,
And at the end they'll cause a complete fiasco ,
That will forever maim your heart .


True Love:
True love is a faithful wait,
When you have true love,
You will find God in between 'True and Love'.
Ie, True Gods Love

Cynical mind and lustful thought ,
Doesn't exist in T.L .
But do expresses and evergreen lyric
Called True Love Waits.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[angel]

To me, true, real love, is letting go when the object of your affection loves another. To love someone true is to wish for their happiness, even if they can't find it with you.
I had such a love.
With all my heart, I loved him, but he loved another.
He was separated from her; the separation was against his will and he wanted so to go home.
Eventually, that was allowed, and he ran home, as he'd always said he would.
"Don't fall for me," he told me, earnestly. "My heart is no longer mine to give, so we can never be more than friends."
I said that was all I wanted, but I was lying.
He went home, and, eventually, I was happy for his happiness, even if it couldn't include me.
It took a long time to get to that place.
I'm glad I made it, because it banished the bitterness.

[Toto James]

Everybody has different views, and so yours is beautiful too. You are strong

[angel]

I have no choice.
Thank you, though, dear one.

[Toto James]

Its hard to let of someone we love.
I had someone in life ,I love him still but he only loves to about sex so I left him

[angel]

Probably best. Hope you find love again.

[Toto James]

We still talk to each other, just that we dont belong together

[angel]

I'm glad of that. That could become a deep friendship, if it has not already.

[Toto James]

I hope, and pray heheh ..

[Wild Rose]

Toto I love this poem
How do you know you have true love
We met through friends - who engineered the meeting(s)
We made plans in our own heads > They were the same
Parents (both sets) disagreed but left it to us
Silver and Golden now behind us her hair now has light streaks
Sliver and Gold amongst the dark
both for one and one for both

[Toto James]

I'm talking about relationship with ya opposite sex .
As a christian most of us believed what I wrote

[Wild Rose]

Yes Silver and Gold anniversaries
Silver and golden threads in her dark hair

[Toto James]

Please let me know I needed to be corrected

[Wild Rose]

no correction required

[Toto James]

I really admire you honesty

[Gee]

I'm not a christian, have no religion, need not the crutch of an age old story or blind faith to justify living.
Have known true love with my wife for 27 years, my daughter 18 years and my mother 56 years :))

[Toto James]

Do you agree with what I wrote?

[Gee]

No. Folk change, there's no point staying in a relationship if it is not what you want. In my view ya need to kiss a few frogs before ya find ya prince.

[Toto James]

Hahaha yeah ,thanks anyways

[Gee]

My pleasure..

[Ghost writer]

that's really great, I'm a Christain too, and I really appreciate someone who get's the differences between love and true love

[Toto James]

Aww, thank you so much sweety

[Ghost writer]

Of course, I hope you have a lot of true love :)

[Toto James]

I haven't found one yet heheh

[Onlyme]

I actually really like this a lot. Well written and nicely expressed.

[Toto James]

hey thank you so much

[Verse]

Hi, Toto,

Actually, I do agree... true love waits, and waits patiently. :):) Thank you for reminding us that love is greater than ourselves.

I felt drawn to throw down some Scripture here. I hope you don't mind a bit of St. Paul to the Corinthians...

Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away.

V

[Toto James]

I love it, thank you

[Verse]

You're most welcome.

[Toto James]

Please also let me know if you see any grammar errors

[Verse]

Happy to, my dear.

There's always a fear OF FALLING in love again.

with lustful thoughtS,

i.e., True God's Love

Cynical mindS and lustful thoughtS
DO NOT exist in T.L .
But AN evergreen lyric IS EXPRESSED
Called True Love Waits.

[Toto James]

Yay, thank you so much