Ferris Wheel

Ferris Wheel

A Poem by Tomi
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Love is endless

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It’s the last day of the rest of our lives

Our hands tremor on a Ferris wheel

Our kids; their husbands and their wives

A dozen grand kids on our dying will

 

Careful not to call us old

For that we already know

For one day our story might be told

Of the kind of love with let show

 

Hand in hand, soul intertwined

Our smiles align our wrinkled faces

For everlasting love; few can find

In open and hidden places

 

It’s the final day of till death do us part

In sickness, health, richer and poorer

6 decades of marriage couldn’t keep us apart

In breathing, living, now and forever


© 2013 Tomi



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Tomi
when i'm grey and old, i want this to be my Story. Happy valentines Day

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Great job, Tomi. You always have such amazing narrative poems

Posted 4 Years Ago


and hopefully it will....great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nice to read that a young person cares about long term relationships. And written vers well too. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Good to see two people who had spend many years together. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Posted 4 Years Ago



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