Loser

~ for Gorthi's Limerick competition ~

The judge was called Gorthi Manasvini

A Limerick competition she was spinning

TJ entered a 'rick

That he wrote in a tick

With not a snowball in Hell's chance of winning.

Author's Note

ignoble grammar problems

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Funny little poem, this is. Weirdly enough, I kind of love it. :D

[Tony Jordan]

(psst....*whispers* - It's a straight bribe is what it is. Immortalise the judge/moderator? Surely I must win ! No one will suspect I'm nobbling the judge)
damn...I forgot the Live Feed !!

xD
I hope you'll enter a 'rick Lovecraft.
Thank you for loving this.
:)

[Lovecraft]

lol. Unfortunately I'm very poor in regards to Limericks, I just can't do 'em.

[Tony Jordan]

You'd be good with an anti-Limerick then methinks...

[Lovecraft]

Read my poetry, I tend to write on the darker side. ;)

[Gee]

Ooh,ooh, might 'ave a go at that. Morning guvnor

[Tony Jordan]

You'd better Gee !!
Evening matey...

Danke..

[Emily Mac]

I like the idea, smart however not your best piece. a few grammar problems but all in all an alright piece.

[Tony Jordan]

OH ! You blaspheme Emily...!
Moi does not do grammar problems...tsk..tsk..

joking
Thanks for your constructive review my friend.
:)

[Jimmy Yetts]

A delightful entry!
Limerick's ain't easy to write; they turn bland, quickly.
Ya dun good, Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you Jimmy!
:)

[Valentine]

Tony, you brightened my evening with this one. Hope you win..Valentine

[Tony Jordan]

If I don't win I'll expect the bribe money back Kathie.
Thank you very much!
;p

[Ana Papaya]

Cute and clever. :)
I hope you win!

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you Ana. The good wishes will certainly help. I appreciate them.
:))

[Ana Papaya]

You are welcome.

[aLittlePain]

Nicely done :) I agree with Lydi it is quite cute. R xo

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you Rach. I'm gonna see if crying my luck, brings me some good luck. lol
:D

[aLittlePain]

Lol....well that's one way I guess :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....actually, it is a cute limerick! Lydi**

[Tony Jordan]

Lol
I thought mentioning the judges name might win me some favor - its not what you know, it's WHO you know in this world Lydia.

Thank you very much!
:)

[Lydia Shutter]

True enough! LOL

[Ken Simm.]

The one thing I could put with Tony
Was something nasty to do with a pony
I racked my brains
Leaving horrible stains
Thinking no wonder Tony is lonely
( With poems and friends who write like this, is it any wonder? I mean.)

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - the thing with the pony - was a total fabrication - I don't know who started that rumour but I was only checking it's tail was stuck on properly.

You have to enter this one Ken. Get those Rab C's and Milligans out of ye!!

Thank you - the word friend here warmed the cockles of my heart matey. :))

[Bala Gorthi]

Your limerick rick has tickled me. However, I see winner in this "Loser".
A very well composed instant limerick!
Thank you for sharing.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you very much Bala.
Finger's crossed ...lol
:))