Bleeding Insanity

this makes no sense and it's a little dark [joker dark :O]

stab me all you want
i will feel no pain
cut me all you want
i'll just watch you become insane

bleed all you need
i will feel no sympathy
scream all you need
to me it's a symphony

cry all you like
i won't care
plead all you like
it doesn't matter if it's unfair

stab yourself all you want
it won't hurt
cut yourself all you want
you are not the first

but you won't watch me become insane
just watch me touch the eternal flame

Reviews

[Immortal Phantom]

good poem, very powerful and a great attitude

[.........]

This is a kickbutt poem, not unlike many songs out there. I can see this being sung with an electric guitar and an angry singer who rocks it out on stage. the last stanza is definitely the most powerful, but only because I cannot say that your entire poem is the best stanza. The message here is powerful: a form of indifference, mangled and twisted into an I-Just-Don't-Care idea. I really like this poem, because there are times in everyones' lives when we just have to let go and not care anymore, because if we don't, we will become insane, as you have said.
There is a Breaking Benjamin song that this reminds me of. "You think you've won this fight/you've only lost your mind... you had to have it all/well have you had enough?/you greedy little b*****d, you, will get what you deserve.../ When all is said and done, I will be the one/ to leave you in the misery and hate what you've become."

[Juliet]

Oh my gosh. I loved this! My favorite part was the first two lines. Maybe it's because I'm slightly insane myself, and maybe it's because it just captures how everyone feels. This poem was so perfect because it could be so many things but all the feelings are the same. Amazing work!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is good! I like it a lot and Hope to read more like this!

[paradise]

Ohh i remember this one I like it marshmello its a little wierd and dark like the joker but its good :)

[Blake]

Even if it does not make any sense, like you said, it is still a very good write. haha