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Come Home

A Poem by lauren emily
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Pretty much speaks for itself

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I need to write a goodbye
I need to stop letting you in
You've caused me enough pain
You're just like a deadly sin

Your smile, your laugh, the things that you say
They lure me in, but the feelings soon fade

I love you, I hate you,
Yet I want nothing more
Then to just be by your side
And to forever be called yours

But you're never here
Why won't you stay?
I love you, I need you,
Please come back one day...


 

© 2009 lauren emily


Author's Note

lauren emily
I had fun playing with the font...haha

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I'm living this right now poetess. Thanks for putting words to my feelings.
And beautiful words at that!

Antonio

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, that was lovely, sweet and sad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


it shows u had fun :), i just cried when i read this

Posted 14 Years Ago


You are showing the vulnerable side
tate

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well havent we all felt these familiar emotions lol


Posted 14 Years Ago


I actually liked what you did with the font, and that usually annoys me. I love the go away/come back of your words. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well written. Although i think it should be "your smile" instead of "you smile" in the second verse. Other then that I found it a very beautiful poem.
Nice write

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2009
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lauren emily
lauren emily

Long Beach, CA



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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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