Loneliness

You search and search

for someone who cares,

anyone who understands...

loneliness,

it hurts,

it kills you deep inside,

it makes you feel empty,

it stops you in your stride,

you cry yourself to sleep,

hugging your pillow tight

wishing for someone

to hold you through the night.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Short piece, but very touching too. Loneliness is real for many. Well written piece which has a lot of depth to it.
Thank you for sharing.

Mark.

[It Will Change]

Thank you Mark :)

[matrixmark]

No need to thank me.

I thank you for putting up here.

Mark.

[The Exiled Wolf]

Short but touching most aspects of loneliness. I feel that this is on the descriptive side, but the progressive reveal of details, from just vague feeling to exact actions, is nice. Thanks for sharing!

[It Will Change]

Thanks for reading :)

[Ardra]

You have painted the picture of sadness in your short sweet words....we all wish for someone who we can depend on and not to feel lonley...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful creation :)

[It Will Change]

And Thank You for reading :)

[Anjali]

I like this poem, a lot. It's sad, but, on the other hand, it's really beautiful, as well. Keep writing!

[It Will Change]

Thank you dear :)

[Anjali]

Your very welcome!!!!

[Sophia V]

I love this. Short and to the point, yet beautiful at the same time. thanks for sharing!

[It Will Change]

Thank you dear :)

[Manasa.L]

The emotions have flown like water, in the dark lonely jungle. If the spring of love strikes, it will become alive again or else if the fire of loneliness will burn it down into ashes.
Very nice, beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[It Will Change]

even ur review is poetic... :D
Thank you for reading :)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you and welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. You have exactly described those emotions. I truly liked it.

[It Will Change]

m glad u liked it...Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome. ☺