Glimpse Of Hope

Glimpse Of Hope

A Poem by Valentine

     "Glimpse Of Hope"
 
The dark of night...closes in.
Erasing all light, where day had been.
 
Leaving a glimpse ,a promise of hope;
As stars come out, helping me cope..
 
Helping, to bring cheer, to the heart;
Give this life, a brand new start..
 
Hiding hopelessly from, all love and dreams.
Thinking of  life, as an impossible thing.
 
Standing...looking , up into  the sky...
And wondering, as I ask..." God why?"
 
Will those tiny beams aid my sight,
As I try to walk back into the daylight?
 
Bringing some hope of finding a new life...
Without you, and this sadness and strife.
 
Up all night thinking of how and what to do.
As I dream and ponder. my way...without you,

And my world of lost dreams.

       Valentine

© 2017 Valentine



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Sad and powerful use of words and thoughts dear friend.
"Up all night thinking of how and what to do.
As I dream and ponder. my way...without you,"
Love make us smile and can make us so sad. Always a pleasure to read your work my friend.
Coyote



Posted 8 Months Ago


The dark of night...closes in.
Erasing all light, where day had been.
BEAUTIFUL START.


Bringing some hope of finding a new life...
Without you, and this sadness and strife.
I THINK MOVING ON IN LIFE AFTER FORGETTING SOMETHING ONCE WAS MOST PRECIOUS IS AS DIFFICULT AS NOTHING ELSE.

WELL DONE MATE !! KEEP UP

Posted 1 Year Ago


Life goes on... hope paves the way... nice poem!
Terry

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Thank you Terry. Kathie
Sadly, there is little we can do about loss, painful as it is, except hope that our loved ones have achieved a better place. Good write, Kathie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Ted, thank you for your kind words. It does ease and I have been invited out to dinner, feels odd b.. read more
what are we without hope and dreams

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Ron, after those to leave we just have the memories. Kathie
Life is an interesting journey, how we still find strength to dream and ponder without our loved ones is something that is of a mystery to me still.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Loss through death, there is no one to blame. Lose another way and you can blame the other or yourse.. read more
Hope is something we all hope to keep inside of ourselves to go that extra mile

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

It was very hard for me after the loss of my husband. Kathie
Thank you for sharing

such an honest and heartfelt write

J

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Losing someone hurts. Kathie
Jenny

1 Year Ago

it most certainly does
ohhhhhhh so sad in closing!! i was into the hope of all the rest ;)) but alas ..life does deliver quite the blows at times ...feeling like a crumpled rag ..no bones to it to even attempt to rise ;{
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

This was personal and the words just found their way to paper. Kathie
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:( .................
Everyone needs a little hope. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Valentine

1 Year Ago

Yes they do. Kathie

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