Bella Coola

Bella Coola

A Poem by Victorian1842
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In August I spent a month living in the Bella Coola valley with my better half, Alex. It was the most inspired to write about my surroundings I have ever felt.

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I was in the rainforest, the vale and valleys beneath me. School house falls fell away to a trickle.
I was in the rainforest, the rain was not. The mossy floor crunched like cornflakes under my boots.
I was in the rainforest, the trees trembled; thirsty. The familiar chill of the Chilcoten coast gave way to a heatwave.
I was in the rainforest, the smoke was between the leaves. I could see nothing would bring Fall to Bella Coola faster than the fires racing towards the valley lake a freight train.

© 2014 Victorian1842



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Victorian1842
My first attempt at poetry. Any and all conatructive reviews very welcome.

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If this is your first piece, its a really nice one. If you continue , you would get even better.Consider beaks in between lines for more drama. Keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Victorian1842

4 Years Ago

Thank you, that's really kind of you. Yeah I didn't really know how to break it up, I'll look into i.. read more

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Added on November 3, 2014
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Tags: NATURE, rainforest, fire, weather, seasons, travel, adventure.

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Victorian1842
Victorian1842

Fort Erie, Canada



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