The Darkest Skies

Unfinished

The darkest skies watch over me,

they sparkle in my eyes.

Gems and jewels fantasy,

where deep temptation lies.

I lay upon the bedrock, 

of ash and iron ore.

and watch the wind around me, 

where silent shadows soar. 

My soul sings in melodies, 

its tune something sublime. 

My hands reaching in darkness, 

to grasp its matching rhyme.

The darkest eyes above me, 

with their gaze my heart does rise.

holding secrets, smoldering sin, 

reflecting in his sighs. 

Upon the shore we sit, 

where the waves come crashing in.

Our desire like the ocean, 

pushing and pulling from within.

My body begins to shatter, 

the sensation much to great.

And my heart bleeds in crimson, 

Author's Note

Still needs to be finished, but just a small taste for now till I decide what to do with it.

Reviews

[terry smith]

I really like this...hope you finish it!

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Wow to not be finished it really speaks:)))))))))))))))))))))) I think it was a deeply well said and I understand its meaning.

[PearlPoet]

Just drifting by to say: I was here again!!!! ~smiles~ Still love the poem and waiting to see if you are going to revers it.... ??

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)...............

[SonOfPlunder]

Please finish this, i love the visuals you create and i'm eager to see where this goes. You have a skill for dark imagery

[PearlPoet]

Mystically beautiful as of now... I hope that your closing post will be a Stargazer of all Poems.. ~hugs~

[Die Schwarz Lacheln]

this is eloquent.
what did you draw inspiration from ?

[Echoes of Eros]

You give vision to such a darkening life and skies personified. There are elements of fantasy and etches of the soul seeking deeper treasures. Passionate and powerful your thoughts.