You underestimate who you're dealing with.

You underestimate who you're dealing with.

A Poem by Eden

Park your car

Sit right here

You're not goin' no where

Let me make this clear

I think it's safe to say you were here

A time or two

 

The holes in the walls

The letters spread out

Where our feelings began to crawl

The blankets on the bed

All fucked up

Where all our intentions fell in the fall

 

(x2)And say it again

"I'm leaving"

Then get it going

I'm wasting away, tossing and turning

In the messes you've made

No one invited you to clean up the after party

Run, run, away

 

Blame who you must

I found it in me to tell you I'm done

You roll your eyes cause you know

That's the only promise I can't keep to you

Want me to write you a song?

I'll write you two.

Make you feel small for all the stupid s**t

You put yourself through

It's time to wake up b***h

No one's gonna be calling you

 

Drink as much as you'd like

As some stranger at some party

Where you hope to spend the night

Next to someone new and pretty

You scream, "Down to F**k"

I scream, "Get up s**t"

As you wake up in the morning with an aching in your gut

Please, tell me why I should give a f**k?

 

(x2)And say it again

"I'm leaving"

Then get it going

I'm wasting away, tossing and turning

In the messes you've made

No one invited you to clean up the after party

Run, run, away

 

And when you start to see

The things you missed out on

When you ran away from me

Just remember all the times

I let you slide by

With all of the filthy lies and allabies

And don't be surprised

If you decide to come back around

And I'm smiling with a middle finger in the air

Cause I just don't care.

 

This is goodbye.

 

(x2)And say it again

"I'm leaving"

Then get it going

I'm wasting away, tossing and turning

In the messes you've made

No one invited you to clean up the after party

Run, run, away

© 2010 Eden


Author's Note

Eden
just wrote it straight out, no editing or anything so be nice.

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It is really a nice work.
Proves your expertise in crafting song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Whoa. I'd hate to piss you off. I'm kidding.:)

This is a really good poem that includes all the anger one feels when they are entirely disappointed. I hope she learned her lesson. What goes around comes around.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2010
Last Updated on November 25, 2010
Tags: cheating, lying, whore

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Eden
Eden

Winchester, KY



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