This is a fallow up to a previous poem called "Supernova Heart"
Absolute magnitude... also known as absolute visual magnitude, relates to measuring a heavenly object’s brightness when viewed from 10 parsec or 32+ light years
Bolide... is a fireball. A large brilliant meteor that explodes
Cataclysmic variable... are stars that invariably increase in brightness and decrease to a nearly dormant state
Supermassive black hole... Black hole located at the center of a galaxy containing millions or billions of solar masses
Superluminal motion... Movement that looks to be faster than the speed of light
singularity ... An area wherein space and time are infinitely distorted
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imagination on steroids :) great motion and very strong!
Globy
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This Poem Is imaculate! and Yes a ball-buster incomparison to Supernova heart. same direction must the delivery just makes me wanna scream! You are a brilliant writer and I hope more poets come to see that! I love the shape of DNA that it takes... even if that wasn't the form you intended. I love steller space and all things of the sort you hit me right in the heart! I love this line the best!
"she bends backwards
contorting her limbs
just to spread
her thighs
As she wraps
her legs
around
Astronomy
and stellar
constellations"
could say this over and over "Quilting the stars / in superluminal motion" the use of 'supermassive black hole' reminds me far too much of muse, always will, thanks twilight.
You make good use of stellar imagery... and use it well t convey the power of those primordial feelings... the spreading o thighs around the constellations... which can produce the milky way *smiles*
The poem is amazing. I had to read a few times for the pleasure of the thoughts. The description took me to many places and you made me think with the strong statements in this poem.
"She sits
nursing her
internal wounds
stitching them together
with pen and ink"
Thank you for your amazing poetry.
Coyote
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