More depth than meets the eye

More depth than meets the eye

A Poem by write her story with love

Inspired by the song "bad reputation" - Shawn Mendez

She's so quick to show them her appearance, whether it's the new lipstick or her naked body in between the sheets

But when it comes to posing with her soul, mind, heart and thoughts: she's as shy as a cigarette that wont light

© 2017 write her story with love

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Interesting wording here, but it is actually quite captivating. I really like the movement, style and rhythm to this though, you can definitely feel as though it were song like or inspired by song, just because it's so easy to read and there wasn't anywhere to trip up or get stuck (in your meaning or your flow!) I've read a few of your poems today, and I really love the way your voice comes out. It is interesting and creative but it is still friendly and simple enough that others want to know what you have to say. I am not sure why you do not have more comments or votes, but your work is definitely something classified as incredible.

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Added on May 18, 2017
Last Updated on May 18, 2017


write her story with love
write her story with love


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