"Smokey Barrel"

"Smokey Barrel"

A Poem by Jason
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Clint's best friend you never knew of.....Jake.

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Smoky barrel resting quietly heated in holster

One heart beats, another one to rest

Creeping death awaits; Haunts the eyes fading black

The only thing in sight is cheap whiskey and sex

Smoky barrel opens eye, searching for new love

Powered by the fuel of man, power, and lust

Hot steel. Cold heart. Body slams on the mud

Smoky barrel found use through defenseless blood

Single eye of steel smokes at the hip

Reluctantly held by a sweet empty grip

Making one last scan, clearing the area

The innocent air prays the empty don’t slip

Silence remains, as does victory in that eye

Yet another soul has been riddance a life

“Let us rest now son, for Old Smoky to find”

Empty soul lays down among the cold of a shoulder

Smoky barrel request quietly heated in holster

© 2009 Jason


Author's Note

Jason
Clint's best friend you never heard of, Jake....

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I admire this poem for a few reasons, particularly the classic form and original thought, the mark of a real poet
that can resist the clause and justify the means through straight sentence structure,
and justify the means at the same time holding the reader in the grip of the palm through imagery
and emotional detail that brings the words to life, work to transport the reader to another place and time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this work of mind art.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Jason,

A very creative write that has a concise message from beginning to end..and the western flavor of it made it most interesting to read! Ole' Clint Eastwood would be right proud of this write about Smokey Barrel!...there are a couple of lines I particularly like....creeping death awaits; haunts the eyes fading black...very visual!..and the innocent air prays the empty don't slip....
Great write...but, all of your writes are great!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Posted 14 Years Ago


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0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I like this i simply thought it was wonderfully written and a well driven picture as well.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I admire this poem for a few reasons, particularly the classic form and original thought, the mark of a real poet
that can resist the clause and justify the means through straight sentence structure,
and justify the means at the same time holding the reader in the grip of the palm through imagery
and emotional detail that brings the words to life, work to transport the reader to another place and time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this work of mind art.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

great poem. you have written it really good. and it's really deep.
great work!
thanks for sharing, and beeing my friend :)

Akina

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Such a fun read, it paints a vivid picture as well as floooows poetic.

I can hear a deep, growl-y voice, gruff with these words. Like he's reminiscing at the saloon, with a mustache-clad bartender.

Awesome.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very well done! I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow great piece. Reminds me of an old shoot 'em up western. Ok so I am a western fan somewhat. lol
Great piece.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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