I did, she did not.

I did, she did not.

A Poem by Martin Ramirez

I saw her once,
She saw me.
I smiled and waved,
She nodded.
I talked to her,
She talked to me.
I fell in love,
She said goodbye.

© 2013 Martin Ramirez


Author's Note

Martin Ramirez
Something I thought of, and hope not to experience, though I may be close to do so.

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aww, that's awful..............interesting format, nice switch off, great write. hope you don't experience it though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


aww, hope not too :p xox

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's a feeling that is unavoidable but it comes with risking your heart. I wish there was more of an expansion and a back and forth between you and her. It seems very sudden in it's turn for the worse. Also a reason for the love would help. It is very clear though and conveys its message in a way that i like to see in writing of this sort.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh wow. Love it. Clever write. Hope that never happens to you either, haha

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Martin Ramirez
Martin Ramirez

Hermosillo, Sonora, Mexico



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