The Opposite Was True

The Opposite Was True

A Poem by The Twin Arenas

the fewtch

Smells of smoke
as electric we
can live

The problem is that
we are too
verynice people


Time, buddy.

© 2015 The Twin Arenas

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We're smelling smoke, because our electric world will burn. And everyone's too damn nice, to do anything about it!

Posted 3 Years Ago

This made me think of two guys in vegas - what happens in vegas ..yada yada
but they didnt do anything that called for the well-known phrase to be uttered.
Promising themselves that next time they will really live it up; however they secretly know that they are past all that but the pay lip service to youth with that mantra - next time buddy.
How many times has that been said on the drive out of Vegas I wonder.

Posted 3 Years Ago

almost could be two friends, who might want to try more, but each is committed to someone else...

"too very nice people" too nice to do that to their significant others.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on June 20, 2015
Last Updated on June 20, 2015


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