Iowa Temple

Iowa Temple

A Poem by Waconda Springs

The Fewtch

I borrowed a guitar
from the deaf lady's daughter
carried it
on my back felt
the warmth about
the waist of the blonde

Stairs sunk
like rising water
like a sunset backwards
massive spires curves like gold brick rainbows and blues

I saw her
and saw what

I wanted to see

the curves and lace

© 2015 Waconda Springs

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You have a wonderful array of colors going through your words I deeply enjoyed

Posted 3 Months Ago

Waconda Springs

3 Months Ago

Muchas gracias.
Do not walk away in silence? Love the smash of words - all so wonderfully intrepid. I am glad to have read you this rather quiet night -

Posted 10 Months Ago

refreshing write
cool for sure.
the guitar and girls
intertwine into both
as you walk away.

Posted 1 Year Ago

I have read a few of your poems and they all provide a very interesting word choice and content. I like your take on life, reflected in your poems, in general. The writes read kind of different from other poetry but enjoyable.

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot. It's immediately intriguing. The imagery is unique and cool.. Thanks for writing it

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very nice. So short and sweet but just enough imagery to create all the right pictures in my mind.

Posted 2 Years Ago

The idea of a deaf lady whose daughter plays guitar, music she can never hear.
Choppy flow like the lake on a windy day.
The last four lines are great too.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I love how choppy this is, it makes reading very interesting. The imagery is great (:

Posted 2 Years Ago

Waconda Springs

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the read, S
so i wrote you a big long dialog, about how dicks look bigger on the horizon.

and then the computer crashed and the horizon disappeared.


i dig you brad

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Waconda Springs

2 Years Ago

i appreciate the dig/
making dicks look bigger is sort of why the horizon exists.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on December 27, 2015
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