Writer's Block

'Ah, it's raining thoughts again.'

Time spills in waste
A nose, two eyes, and ears,
And a tongue for taste.

Five senses.
No more, no less.
Sunrises and Night falls
With no charm, no suspense,
A nest for dreary mothballs

A vacant street where
Journeys are stuck
And it's pointless to stare
Scoffing at the clock

Until it starts to rain
I scrunch another page
And reality and beyond
Become my stage.

Maidens, Knights
A good old mage
And hazardous missions
Athletes, Rivals
And tall ambitions

Genies in bottles
Yearn to be free
Stars and space shuttles
and infinities

Mortals and Greek Gods
And those that are neither
The strangest love odds
That you have ever seen

Past lives, reminiscence,
And incarnation.
Tragedies that crush
A merry celebration.

Mistakes, regrets and
Morals we learn
From fantasy pages
We eagerly turn

So many worlds
Through a pen
I've sought

Yet once I breathe in
To view my great thought
It seems as if
I'd disfigured a once
Healthy face

A rough sketch with
Only flawed points
Stiff curves to frown at
Misplaced joints
And unfitting colors

A trash bin indifferent
To all the wrinkled mess
How long has it been,
I quietly confess,
Since I last wrote a piece of prose
I candidly enjoy and proudly posses?

Author's Note

Writer's Block sucks..

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Writer's block does suck. Great description

[Danielle]

This is a great piece of writing considering its about writers block, lovely!!!

[TL Boehm]

yes it does, but look what happens when you break through it

[Leigh]

Well you solved it by writing about it, this is a very good piece

[Barbara Walker]

Well done! Your prose hits it on the head in a most descriptive way! One correction-last line, last word-possess.

[YouoweYoupay]

Your corrections and reviews are appreciated. Thanks for stopping by, Ms. Walker.

[Daydreamer54]

Mistakes, regrets and
Morals we learn
From fantasy pages
We eagerly turn
This was my favorite stanza and I agree writer's block does sucks but from what i've seen, i think the problem here is too many ideas. Anyway, glad to see a piece form you. ^^

[YouoweYoupay]

You might be right, i do have too many ideas floating in the space of my mind. Thamks for the thoughtful review. :-)

[afra]

Amazing poem.....i love it ...welldone

[YouoweYoupay]

Im glad you like it, Afra. Thanks.

[Emunah June.]

Wow, that was nothing less than majestic. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

[YouoweYoupay]

Thank you, Koda. Xoxo.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe the writer's block had ended. The poem was very good. I like the many thoughts and places you took me in the poem. A very good ending to a entertaining poem.
Coyote

[YouoweYoupay]

Thats really nice of you Coyote. I do hope my writers block is gone.

[Japanese Cherry]

Nice wording, I loved it... and i agree, writer's block sucks

[YouoweYoupay]

I like your review. Thanks, black cat.

[Japanese Cherry]

you're very welcome ;)