Sugar

Sugar

A Poem by Project Mayhem
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This is about loneliness and feeling the pain of it day after day

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Sleep in sugar
One question how
Can it happen so slowly
Back to habits
Desperate around
Sensual favors so lonely 

Faults be mine to savor 
Shall be it forever

Don't go please stay here
You're not my hatred
Bleeding from my head
I'll stay right here

Who has seen me
I don't feel stranger
Those days of pain are outlining
Frayed strings
No stronghold
Failure comes naturally to me

Don't go please stay here
You're not my hatred
Bleeding from my head
I'll stay right here


© 2015 Project Mayhem



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This is so interesting! I can feel the loneliness and pain in this piece. I read the first stanza and thought it was going to be about addiction honestly, like addiction to those feeling. Its is a really well written poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very interesting write was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yes loved every bit of this one. The going back and forth bantering worked. Now because I am a chronic diabetic sugar, I need some insulin to help digest the devilish sweets you just served in this piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


You have such a talent with poetry and lyrics and this one is no exception. It has such strong emotion tied in with every stanza and a strong sense of feeling in desperate need. Really good poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Project Mayhem

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I feel like I bombard everyone with my writings though I don't want to annoy you with my .. read more
BeeBev

2 Years Ago

I don't mind lol
Gosh, this was remarkable! The emotion is just so beautiful and fragile (if you know what I mean).
Please send as many read requests as you'd like! I'm always happy to give comments! Oh, and I do not believe I have introduced myself. You may call me CG! I hope we can be friends :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Project Mayhem

2 Years Ago

Thanks. I hate to bombard you guys with read requests I like to know what people think of some of m.. read more
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

Lol :)
I like read requests!

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Added on February 3, 2015
Last Updated on March 11, 2015

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Project Mayhem
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I write music and lyrics and some my poems are prototypes for the songs I want to write. Some poems are short and sometimes vague but, I've always liked songs/poems that are dense and vague where it m.. more..

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