Sugar

This is about loneliness and feeling the pain of it day after day

Sleep in sugar

One question how

Can it happen so slowly

Back to habits

Desperate around

Sensual favors so lonely 

Faults be mine to savor 

Shall be it forever

Don't go please stay here

You're not my hatred

Bleeding from my head

I'll stay right here

Who has seen me

I don't feel stranger

Those days of pain are outlining

Frayed strings

No stronghold

Failure comes naturally to me

Don't go please stay here

You're not my hatred

Bleeding from my head

I'll stay right here

Reviews

[Alexa Tasch]

This is so interesting! I can feel the loneliness and pain in this piece. I read the first stanza and thought it was going to be about addiction honestly, like addiction to those feeling. Its is a really well written poem

[child of God]

Very interesting write was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

Yes loved every bit of this one. The going back and forth bantering worked. Now because I am a chronic diabetic sugar, I need some insulin to help digest the devilish sweets you just served in this piece.

[BeeBev]

You have such a talent with poetry and lyrics and this one is no exception. It has such strong emotion tied in with every stanza and a strong sense of feeling in desperate need. Really good poem!

[Project Mayhem]

Thank you. I feel like I bombard everyone with my writings though I don't want to annoy you with my stuff. I always like to hear thoughts about some of my writings where I'm not sure about

[BeeBev]

I don't mind lol

[Cool Girl]

Gosh, this was remarkable! The emotion is just so beautiful and fragile (if you know what I mean).
Please send as many read requests as you'd like! I'm always happy to give comments! Oh, and I do not believe I have introduced myself. You may call me CG! I hope we can be friends :)

[Project Mayhem]

Thanks. I hate to bombard you guys with read requests I like to know what people think of some of my writings that I'm not sure about and I do give back reviews to others as well. We can be friends too lol

[Cool Girl]

Lol :)
I like read requests!