Within Your Name

This is a love song but it also involves some eroticism. It's more about when you're in love with your other and you wonder if they feel the same but it's scaring the hell out of you.

These clumsy motives in my way

I just watch you sleep

Passing down is all that she would want

We are ethereal

If you are still so hesitant 

I will understand

So I push myself in this

Fantasy relate

She can feel our wounds that heal us both

Fraying strings that are

Anxiously waiting

I will see your soul turn into lights

Forever within your name

Passing down is all that she does want

We are ethereal

Every sight with you is radiant

Forever is your name

 

So I push myself in this

Fantasy relate

She can feel our wounds that heal us both

Fraying strings that are

Anxiously waiting

I will see your soul turn into lights

Forever within your name

I settle down my head hardly soft

With you by my side

Say the first thing that you want now

You'll be there by me

Reviews

[BeeBev]

Again such a great poem/song it held so much emotion and I love the way you write.

[BeeBev]

Really lovely poem very emotive and romantic, your words and the rhythm leave a lasting impression after the reader has finished.

[Alexa Tasch]

I love the repetition and imagery in this! The flow starts off a little but off, but it work its self out by the end and the emotion is just entrancing!

[Cool Girl]

Absolutely beautiful! I love the emotion:)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Beautiful piece of work. The title is what really caught my attention. Within your name. I also really like your choice of words. Your words are so sophisticated. Can't really fully describe it. But I really liked it.
Keep up the the good work.