Within Your Name

Within Your Name

A Poem by Project Mayhem
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This is a love song but it also involves some eroticism. It's more about when you're in love with your other and you wonder if they feel the same but it's scaring the hell out of you.

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These clumsy motives in my way
I just watch you sleep
Passing down is all that she would want
We are ethereal
If you are still so hesitant 
I will understand

So I push myself in this
Fantasy relate
She can feel our wounds that heal us both
Fraying strings that are
Anxiously waiting
I will see your soul turn into lights
Forever within your name

Passing down is all that she does want
We are ethereal
Every sight with you is radiant
Forever is your name
 
So I push myself in this
Fantasy relate
She can feel our wounds that heal us both
Fraying strings that are
Anxiously waiting
I will see your soul turn into lights
Forever within your name

I settle down my head hardly soft
With you by my side
Say the first thing that you want now
You'll be there by me



© 2015 Project Mayhem



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Again such a great poem/song it held so much emotion and I love the way you write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Really lovely poem very emotive and romantic, your words and the rhythm leave a lasting impression after the reader has finished.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the repetition and imagery in this! The flow starts off a little but off, but it work its self out by the end and the emotion is just entrancing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Absolutely beautiful! I love the emotion:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful piece of work. The title is what really caught my attention. Within your name. I also really like your choice of words. Your words are so sophisticated. Can't really fully describe it. But I really liked it.
Keep up the the good work.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Project Mayhem
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I write music and lyrics and some my poems are prototypes for the songs I want to write. Some poems are short and sometimes vague but, I've always liked songs/poems that are dense and vague where it m.. more..

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