Now and Forever

Her blonde hair and blue eyes
drove me mad with desire.
Her laugh and her smile
made me want to be with her
now and forever.

I romanced and enchanted her
Made her fall in love.
"Oh Will it's perfect,
I just want to lay here
now and forever!"

But soon we grew apart,
and angry tears were shed.
Our love had fallen apart,
"I'm sorry, Will, it has to be this way.
now and forever."

Author's Note

I kinda just jotted this one down in all honesty. Comments and suggestions greatly appreciated.

Reviews

[Firestone Feinberg]

A strong poem with a great motif. I love that it keeps repeating and how it tells of a different situation at the end. Concise and cool. David

[Will]

I like to have a sort of narrative feel to my pieces, so I'm glad you thought it worked. Thanks for reading and reviewing, David.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good heartbreak poem. Feels like it was a quick write. Sometimes those are the best kind. It's amazing what we can pull out of our a*s sometimes isn't it? Great job

[Will]

Some of my favorite pieces that I've written were spur of the moment. It is amazing. Thanks for reading, Mark.

[Rita L. Sev]

This conveys a heartbreak that many go through - thinking this is "the one" and finding that your not in the same place. For something you just jotted down, a very good write!

[Will]

I'm sure most can relate. Thanks for reading, Rita.