Umbrella Kisses - A Collaboration with Ana Sophia

Umbrella Kisses - A Collaboration with Ana Sophia

A Poem by willweb

Umbrella Kisses

 

You took my umbrella
Ran down the street
Splashing in puddles
Light on your feet

Looked over my shoulder
With a sparkle in my eye
You look cute soaking wet
But I'm happy I'm dry.

The rain now falling harder
As drenched as I can be
"Catch me, catch me, if you can, "
Your voice it called to me

I spun around and ran
Quick as quick can be
Through the alley, to the park
Pressed my back against a tree

Out of breath, I caught you
I said to you, "Now Miss -
you stole my new umbrella -
I think I'll steal a kiss"

I smiled and said "No need to steal
I'll give you one little kiss for free
Just close your eyes and count to ten
Then press your wet lips onto me.

I closed my eyes so very tight
Then counted in the dark
But when I went to kiss you
My lips found only bark.


© 2014 willweb



Author's Note

willweb
Ana challenged me to rhyme - I did my best. :)

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Well at times we find somone who we can relate and the product of the relationship bears fruit. In this contribution there is a very clear understanding of what the intention was. The air of innocence, a very appealing jovial mood that set the tone for an encounter on paper but also at the level of imagination. I find it ver attractive then as a result of listening to one another the responses are equally imbued with feelings that support the mood of the writing which to me it offered balance. It came out playful, naive and with a an embracing sense of expectation. Only to suprise me with the end that not only seems clever but also very fitting.

Great collaboration !

Thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rene! He really is fun to write with. :)
willweb

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rene for this wonderful review. Ana is a fantastic poet and we just kind of let this flow .. read more



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I liked it very much. Just tried "love silly" mine are, not yours. Delightful, fun and lovely. Humm, great rhyming too. Thank will. Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Dale, Ana was the talent behind this one though...I was the one looking for a towel. .. read more
Confuser

2 Years Ago

Y/W............you guys do great work, alone and together. Great collaboration once again.
What a beauty. You should see my BIG GRIN!

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Thank so much Alfred. You should see mine. :)
Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

Mine too! Thank you Alfred. :)
This was whimsically romantic. You two write quite seamlessly and the ending, well the ending, made me smile.

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Icelandicblue. Ana is so much fun to write with. I am thrilled you liked this.. read more
Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it!
I appreciate your comments. :)
haha this was really cute :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

Thank you Alexis. :)
willweb

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Alexis. I am happy you enjoyed our poem.
you did pretty well, actually..

i like the teasing, and then the ending...well, the bark enjoyed the kiss, maybe.

a nice tale told...as love plays tag...and in the end, he is still "it."

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Jacob, I suppose all we can ask for is to still be "it". Thank you for your nice comments.
You took the challenge really well and won. Good job

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Than you Cassie. I did my best, but I am thinking Ana won this time. :)
I think you did a splendid job... the creation, two voice and both with love in their heart! Bravo....

Posted 2 Years Ago


willweb

2 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Nisa. I am thrilled you liked this. Ana is a fantastic poet and I just love w.. read more
This is so funny! I love the rhythm, meter, and rhyme. The ending is sensational! A tease is always so much fun! Very nice write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


willweb

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you liked our poem.
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ANM
Flows really well and the rhyming skips along nicely well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


willweb

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much. This was another fun one to write with Ana. I am glad you stopped by.
ANM

3 Years Ago

Your welcome!
Its very appealing, innocent love and very heart warming...the rhymes are playful and scenario is like old romantic movie, totally amazing job mate!

Posted 3 Years Ago


willweb

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. An old romantic movie, maybe that's why we wrote it in black and white. :) .. read more

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