Dissarray

My state of mind (and life experience) at the moment! Nothing fancy, just my thoughts spilling out.

Life in dissaray

hearing voices

yelling through the night and day.

Life in dissaray

 

Confusion abounds

my mind wonders

round and round

when does it stop, this

Confusion that abounds

 

Heart break

pain so deep and strong

it all feels so very wrong

Heart break

 

WILL

I have the will

I know the way

no more confusion

no more heartbreaking pain

I will find the end

to all the dissaray,

I WILL

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Feel free to say whatever you'd like...

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

My grandfather used to say "An end will come" to all the hard and negative things we face in our lives. We will find ways of overcoming the mountains and learn better ways to sail the waters of life.
Sometimes life can seem so bleak and dark, like the worst of Atlantic storms, but with out faith in ourselves and our prayers of hope. We will survive and stand atop the mountain of our own creation.

A nice little spill of emotions...
Your Friend,
Aaron

[Meredith Leigh]

There is such strong words in this, and it seems to be telling me astory. I love the triumphant ending, and it leaves me with the feeling of accomplishment.
I really liked this, the sytle and the vocabulary drew me in and kept me reading.
Great job!

- Kriss

[Pikachu]

this is the reality of lyfe for most of us but no matter what we go through we can live to hope for a better lyfe. i know the difficulties of lyfe pretty well but we must all keep hope alive in our hearts in order to live our lives the way we want to live them. a great poem with a great moral

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Don't have to be fancy just full of emotions and you got your across nicely... I know I can relate to this and found it very profound.. I have no doubt you will find your way..

remember the little engine that could? I know you can

[BrightEyes]

I know this disarray well, the chaos that seems to be my life of late. I have to assume that at some point things begin to settle once again, leaving me free to take a breath, relax, even if just for a moment in time. I wish that for you my friend, as soon as possible.

[**Cullenified77]

nicee ;)
exactly the state of my mind rite now as well :)