To Find Wings

To Find Wings

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀

And so she laid upon the grass
and gazed up at the sky

And made a wish that one day
she might even learn to fly

And that by faith and focus,
she could reach her dearest goal

And shine just like a star,
and see the light in her own soul.

Her eyes lit up with joy
As she pondered there, these things

And so, with a dream in mind,
she came upon her wings.

© 2016 ❀ Gabriela ❀


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This is very upbeat and I love the line, "and see the light in her own soul..." Beautiful!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! :D
I love the fact that there was a rhyming pattern that was unique. Remember everything is one word! I forget that a lot too. It's common to make those simple errors. I did love the message, and could feel the emotions clearly. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :D Glad you liked it!!
Lovely piece of prose. The structure is light and gives towards the overall feel of the piece. I really enjoyed reading this :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :D
Wonderful writing. Can't comment yet that would be unfair.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! :)

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