No Air

No Air

A Poem by Sabine

A punch in the stomach
A kick in the gut
I didn't see it coming
Air left me all of a sudden
My mind is running
Many things I want to say
Instead I keep my mouth shut
And I say nothing


© 2019 Sabine



Author's Note

Sabine
This was written with the thought of hearing unpleasant info that just hits you out of the blue, yet circumstances and my stubborn mind won't say a thing about it...

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I understand these lines. There have been times when I have been knocked for six by something someone says and can't open my mouth to utter a squeak let alone a response. With me though, it isn't to do with a stubborn streak. It is more that I am left speechless. Relatable write. Nicely conveyed short poem.

Chris

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I understand these lines. There have been times when I have been knocked for six by something someone says and can't open my mouth to utter a squeak let alone a response. With me though, it isn't to do with a stubborn streak. It is more that I am left speechless. Relatable write. Nicely conveyed short poem.

Chris

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some unexpected news/revelations can indeed knock the wind out of us. At such times it is difficult to speak. Then, some things are better left unsaid.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello there! :) I'm 25 and I'm not sure if what I write is poetry. All views and opinions are welcome of course! It's always interesting and lovely to hear feedback on your pieces to learn how it's.. more..

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