It Just Comes To Me.

Red rims your eyes

Heart of gold and purple skies

Tears of melancholy rainbows

Running deep

As you drift through navy dreams

Into sleep

Glistening green of the restless sea

Pale pink stones on the beach

At my feet

Silver moon on gray mountain tops

With a cutrius orange tree

Sits a girl of no color

I am a ghost

And i do believe

The world around me is

Transparent to say the least

Teal wind caresses my cheek

A warm yellow lines the morning peaks

Night cowers behind light

Such a colorful sight to see

But none of them shine

Quite as bright as the

Nothing that is

Me.

 

Bonus Mini Poem ( :

 

You pull me aside, lets go for a walk

My heart skips a beat cuz we need to talk

Your hands on my shoulders force me to look into your eyes

My knees are getting weak as i grow hypnotised

Voices but a whisper, in the cold air they linger

The ring weighs a ton my fagile finger

A million worries dance through my mind

A tear spills over as my lips, yours find

So lightly, your hand brushes up my arm

When you said you loved me, you never meant any harm

I watch you leave without a goodbye

Leaving me breathless, i just wanna die.

 

^^True story, bro.

Reviews

[Caitlin Lea]

I think you did a nice job using color to paint the picture for the reader. Of course, colors also remind us of feelings, so good job there. I think there is a profundity in this piece that escapes the reader at first glance, but the idea that the world is in color and YOU are colorless is a fascinating idea. Then when you say, "And i do believe/ The world around me is/ Transparent to say the least". That is a thought provoking bit.

Good poem. :-)

[Raven Starhawk]

Emotions strung here are well conceived and expressed with awe inspiring words.

[Bailey C. Writing]

These both were brilliant! I couldn't not favorite this after the first few lines because the imagery and beauty of the poem was powerful even within the first few lines :) Very well done.

[Thea]

A lot of emotions...It was great...Love it even the bonus mini poem, haha! :)

[frozensakura]

wow amazing write, loved it:)

[darkgurl]

so many mixed feelings, word of advice when using i captialize it. I loved this all the feelings are well presented. I must cay WOW if this is really true. Amazing write!