I Don't Know What I'm Talking About, but It Sure Sounds Important

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Well it's a drowning system
We all saw it coming
It's a drowning system
And there's no escaping the truth here

This government
This religion
This hatred
This organization
This realization
Of the truth is killing me

I see only circles in my head
This curved geometry
This parabola
These equations
They mean nothing to me

This government
This religion
This hatred
This organization
This realization
Of the truth is tearing me
Tearing me apart

Well it's a drowned system
We all knew it'd happen
It's a drowned system
There's no escaping this truth

Every government has its problems
Whether it be the ones in control
Or the ones under its control

Every religion has its problems
Steeped in rich history
Or steeped in rich lies

Every person has some hatred
Brewing deep within them
Embrace the emotion

Every organization is fucked
When people stop investing
When people walk away

Every realization is harmful
To the eyes opened wide
And to the object realized

Reviews

[Flame DM]

This is awsome. Hits straight to the point and really talks about what's happenning. My favorite stanza stanza was:

Well it's a drowning system
We all saw it coming
It's a drowning system
And there's no escaping the truth here

first stanza, drew me right in. excellent job!

[Jane Doe]

Wonderfully brilliant and poignant. A well written piece illustrating the quagmire that government and organized religion creates. I could not even pick out my favorite lines because the entire piece is so evocative. Bravo!