Today..

The abstract world merge with reality,

An angel dives into the pond of my imagination

And she keeps me pondering,

Today I know angels have got friends.

She takes me from a to z, and sets me on a roller costa with the act,

Sister boss lady kind of act.

I am confused,

I never fantasized about yellow bones,

But today it catches up with me,

As I witness her face, soft like a lace,

With a smile that gest me rolling in the deep in a spilt second,

I wonder if she studies magic,

Coz her beauty truely challenges my logic.

When my eyes meet up with hers, my stomach dances some foreign moves,

And my toes rock some drunken grooves

 Is it the weakness in me,

 

Or her majestic voice that triggers body spasms of love?

I wish we could fly together as doves,

I’ll be her honey and she will be,

My sweet banana pumpkin juice, I am obsessed.

Across the computer I couldn’t help but to listen,

She said something about “b***s”?

That got our heart intertwined like loops

I wonder the taste those scrumptious lips would allow my mind to taste

I bet even koeksisters are less sweet than those…

 

 I am sure it was raining when she was born,

 For heavens were crying to have lost an angel

She is a beauty and a beat,

A beautiful stranger in my element, an angel

The power a man distantly finds upon a woman…

She is beautiful.

No man has ever seen this kind of beauty.

The kind of beauty that makes a blind man goes, I see you

The kind of beauty that makes even a man with no appendages feels the affinity to hold her.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Sounds to me like "Today" was a pretty good day. Sometimes we meet someone who just "knocks us off our feet", who has a profound effect on us for some reason. Sometimes we can't even put our finger on why we feel the way we do. This piece has a delightful blend of humor, emotion, and romance. Vivid imagery and clever descriptions. Nicely done.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

you interpreted it well thanks

[AprilRN1210]

Was my pleasure...

[Ruth]

Wow...a pleasure to read and a little surreal, I like surreal and also ethereal...beautifully done! x

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks Poppy, i like it when u call me X....

[Kamari's]

So sweet and amazingly wrote with the detail of emotion

[Oyindamola Shoola]

this is beautiful....I love your description...

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks.............:)

[CMM2]

Wow, that is all I can say WOW! This is absolutely beautiful. So enchanting, and you used my absolute favorite word "scrumptious" :) lol. I love that word. Really though, I sincerely mean it when I say you have such an unique way with words that is absolutely moving. I am inspired by your writing. I am inspired by you. Great Job fellow poet, Great Job.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

ThaNK YOU VERY much CMM2

[Frontier]

" I am sure it was raining when she was born,
For heavens were crying to have lost an angel" - this was sooooooo heartfelt, I loved this!


"I wish I was her neck,
Coz then her hair would be wrapped around me,
Like a protective snake around her eggs…caressed with her touch.
With those tender, slender hands…

I wish the path between her hairs would let my eyes open into her brain,
Her beautiful mind…" this was very lovely, such creative descriptions.

A poem of genuine attraction.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Thank you very much Frontier

[Edmond Mashao]

Man this is awesome, I mean awesome. "I wish I was her neck, Coz then her hair would be wrapped around me" dats a punch line.
"...For heavens were crying to have lost an angel" She must be beautiful.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

lol she was very key man

[FireFox9]

Awesome you should enter this in the contest going on in Yin Yang Poetry right now. You may end up winning.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much FireFox9

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx but how do i do that.

[maria ( rose)]

omg!! this is so Beautifully done..You can feel the passion and love in this poem. Each stanza is remarkably done in such detail,, it's phenomenal!
maria rose

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much rose, appreciate