chains

umm... a little random bottle of feelings :)

Galloping

              Galloping

 over stormy hills

throwing back my head

calling to the 

                                blood streaked sky

shrieking

screaming

 

again and again

 

 

willing

         wanting

                     waiting

 

falling

 

falling

with sobs and sighs

 

so quiet...

                      so cold

 

wanting to run

                     and hide

 

  to scream and   

            fight

 

too late my friend... too late

 

 

just keep me safe

 

 

i'm trapped in

chains

 

these bonds wont break

 

bring me the key

 

 

 

 

 

set me free

Author's Note

umm... i just wanted to try something a little different :)

Reviews

[Meaghan M]

Well done. The spacing and font changes definitely enhance the poem's impact. Beautifully written.

[Sister Suzie]

This is amazing. Loved it.

[Ellen Hammond]

Oooh I like this. Very visual and a lovely format for it. Great job, my friend.

[Kerwin]

Well.,..this was indeed different! nice job. Good use of adjectives.....loved the color

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I like it... the format adds to the emotions of the piece, certainly eye catching and a great read.