Your Destiny

a Christian poem

I fell in love with the ocean's wave

It gave me a heart to give and to say

That there is only one that I adore

The one who has given me so much more

I walked along with this white sand of yours

I looked up above wishing I could soar

But I know someday I will soar through the stars

Soar through the distance even it it's far

I have felt the pain through this days

But you have poured a rain to wash it away

Though I am small to fight for what's right

I can still hear your voice tonight

You'd say, "My child, my child

I wanted you to know

This is all yours

All yours to own

I have loved you since the day you were born

Will you come to me?

I am your destiny

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Very lovely indeed. The first two stanzas are my favorite. Great job! Keep up the awesome work.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really nice title, and ending it with the titles two words...
nice quote at the end, really a beautiful write,
hmm i loved this line here a lot:
"I have felt the pain through this days
But you have poured a rain to wash it away"

[Bailey C. Writing]

This was beautiful :) I liked your rhyme scheme, and you did a good job, it was quite the good write

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful uplifting poem. Enjoyed so much:)