Deep inside my radiant self

Deep inside my radiant self

A Poem by zubia

Deep inside my radiant self,
lies a winged being ready to fly.
To tear me apart and howl loud,
To break the silence and jump up high.
High up where there's no pain,
and no bars to hold, to restrain
the monster dwelling in this soul;
Struggling to live or to die.

Somewhere inside this shallow smile,
lives a deep frown ready to perish,
to lose itself to the warmth of love;
Love which destroys what lies inside.
Silent from ages, craving to escape,
It bites each part of my soul.
It leaves me aching, yearning for help,
Deep inside my radiant self!

© 2017 zubia



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Awesome message! I love your writing, which sounds like no other, but is also very relatable. The yearning is strong & deeply felt, while I admire the way you weave your ideas into unusual patterns of expression (but still very clear & understandable). This sounds like a dance between the radiant self & the darkness hidden deep down within! Love it! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

5 Months Ago

Thankyou so much for this review, your kindness and your love. :)



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Awesome message! I love your writing, which sounds like no other, but is also very relatable. The yearning is strong & deeply felt, while I admire the way you weave your ideas into unusual patterns of expression (but still very clear & understandable). This sounds like a dance between the radiant self & the darkness hidden deep down within! Love it! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

5 Months Ago

Thankyou so much for this review, your kindness and your love. :)
"Deep inside my radiant self'
zubia,
You created contrasting dark-light and the expression of each trait:
"Deep inside my radiant self,
lies a winged being ready to fly.
to tear me apart and howl loud"
and
"the monster dwelling in this soul'
Struggling to live or to dies"
Above lines show the human struggle with pain or some difficulty.
Then:
"somewhere inside this shallow smile,
lives a deep frown ready to perish,
to lose itself to the warmth of love;"
Your expression throughout is lovely and understandable.
Thank you and blessings,
Kathy


Posted 6 Months Ago


zubia

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for being such a good reader and for your kind words. :)
Kathy Van Kurin

6 Months Ago

Your very welcome!
love is a two edged sword,enjoyed your write

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

9 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for reading. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it; It means so much to me!
 wordman

9 Months Ago

my pleasure
Solemnly Swear
An action-packed suspense thriller that explores the fragile balance between justice and self-preservation.
Each of us has a monster that resides within us. That fact is very eloquently expressed. I liked it a lot.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

9 Months Ago

Thankyou :)
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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