The man with a dagger

He is here...be afraid!

The man with a dagger

Walks with a stagger;  

     oh yes he limps

     his face is slimy.

He comes in the Dark

the Blunt dagger and hammer on his hand. 

On the recess of your mind

Sleeping away from time; 

    dreams of your fantasy

    nightmares they become. 

He places the dagger on your skull

Swiftly with the hammer he hits the core; 

                               blood splashes away 

                               drains enough to feed.

He leaves you alive

Unconscious you're; 

    the man with the dagger keeps coming

    night after night, until your life dies away.

                        

 

  

Author's Note

Let me know if it scared you...

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

It didn't scare me but it conveys very strong sadistic elements which make it darker and heading in that direction, at least for me. I like the dark stuff so these are up my alley.
I feel also this piece in my views was almost metaphorical for so many things of a darker nature that I think you are definitely capturing the mood you're looking for.
I like this, keep it coming.

[dicey jones]

thanks... now I've got to go make something that would have the capability to scare the s**t off your heart.

[unsavable_soul]

I believe you will indeed achieve your goal in this...
Sincerely
Chris

[Prritiy]

na i wasn't scared. just wondered what the write is up to....
and in the end various images like of 'time' emerged.

nicely written

[Anne van der Heijden]

it did a bit haha, i like how it's written so sinister.

[dicey jones]

a bit?! next one might be more than that... thanks for your review.