the heart

the heart

A Poem by rhea
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"Our heart are monsters. That's why our ribs are cages."

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"our hearts are monsters" that's what they say.

for they are the ones that lead us astray

they're what breaks bonds and tear up a home

they're what hurt most when we're all alone.


why, you ask I speak this way?

for fate has taught me this the hard way.

hearts are what harbor our truest emotions.

emotions flow free and drive crude actions.


words are spoken and deeds are done.

people are hurt for its too far gone.

sadness falls and loneliness imparts.

who can you blame but your foolish heart?


the worst thing about this silly heart?

it hurts you most and tears you apart.

how funny, Our heart are monsters.

That's why our ribs are cages.



© 2017 rhea



Author's Note

rhea
this was inspired by a prompt . hope you like it

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You deserve a first place in the contest. I have participated too and wrote a similar poem titled 'Silly heart'
This poem is exactly what I wanted to convey and you have done it very beautifully with enough facts and rhyme.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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The "ribs are cage", provokes thought. Very cool.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This I can feel very deeply for, very well written. On your 2nd to last line of your poem, heart to hearts. I absolutely love your work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


rhea

1 Month Ago

thank you so much!
new idea in the ending, nice poem, good writing. "Our hearts are monsters or they are the ones who lead us astray-good line n theme of the poem. Try exploring the causes of this monstrous thing, why so?

Posted 2 Months Ago


Good, very nice lines.....

Posted 2 Months Ago



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rhea
rhea

mumbai, maharashtra, India



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