Ode To The Self

Ode To The Self

A Poem by Ahmad Alhour
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Written : Feb 3rd, 2010 - Wednesday - 3:19 PM

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[ Ode To The Self ]

Lo! Where in the blossom silent hours
      Fair winter winds appear
   Disclosed were the lonely flowers
      The self awakens in dull rear
   It's cold rapes the innocence of time
      Reactive to lines Summer wrote
   Then sings the harmony of winter rhymes:
      The self dances in melancholic soft
   Such fragrance of nature flings
      Where ascends this self to the sky
   Lovely! The Will to Be again sings
      Softly, it's echoes to every self fly






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It's cold rapes the innocence of time
Reactive to lines Summer wrote
Then sings the harmony of winter rhymes:
The self dances in melancholic soft

such nice lines...loved the way you have portrayed emotional turmoil in words...a tough job done very well...way to go...

:) Love,
Krishna

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Deep, colorful poetry!
Actually just am having my coffee at the office, so I will leave it to that and will make justice by the ratting
All the best wishes,
Tamer

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beutiful flow to this. I especially love these lines:

"It's cold rapes the innocence of time
Reactive to lines Summer wrote
Then sings the harmony of winter rhymes:
The self dances in melancholic soft"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's cold rapes the innocence of time
Reactive to lines Summer wrote
Then sings the harmony of winter rhymes:
The self dances in melancholic soft

such nice lines...loved the way you have portrayed emotional turmoil in words...a tough job done very well...way to go...

:) Love,
Krishna

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short but says a lot. i can see it carrying me around what else can i call this but a great expression of a poetic mind. great job my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words create wonderful images in my spirit that cause me to dance with the beauty of your expressions! Each line led to the other with wonderful flow,
and causes me to reflect upon "self-discovery", and a will to carry on!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A truly beautiful poem. Wonderful descriptive stanzas throughout, flow was great.
Well done! ~ Helena

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 3, 2010
Last Updated on October 2, 2010
Tags: Ode, Poetry, Melancholy, Psychology, Songs, Hymns, Classic, Epic

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Ahmad Alhour
Ahmad Alhour

Athens, Greece



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