Watching Behind the Glass

Um... Just a short poem I was doodling in my notebook today... Again please not hate or judgment.

I'm watching behind the glass
Everyone passes me
Without a second glance
Just walking
Talking
Socializing
Laughing
Loving
Living
I feel like I'm on the outside looking in
No one even pays attention
To how I'm feeling
But it's okay
Because I'm fine just
Watching behind the glass

Reviews

[patricia]

I like how you captured that feeling of isolation that one can get even in the midst of a crowd. Well penned.

[aisling virginia]

Thank you :)

[khalid]

oh woww..very sad, frustration, lonliness, depression feelings expressed in a very nice way with very nice words picking and images...
i liked the expression of seeing behind the glass to express your feelings of being unseen as if you are watching a movie..you see the actors, you imagine and live the situation, but they can never feel your presence...
thank you really for such a nice poem..i liked it..

[aisling virginia]

Thank you very much. Your reviews are always so kind and helpful :) again thanks!

[khalid]

my pleasure