Expectations

Expectations

A Poem by Alka

watered it,
Nourished it,
Saw it grow bit by bit.
When did it grow this large,
Cause now its time to clip its wings.

Expectations, when controlled, life is worth its while,
Loosen the reigns and i call for a tide high,
Destroys me,wash away the smallest joy...
Remember it as that little feeling which then was a game,
Life would be much sorted,had that feeling been then  tamed..


© 2016 Alka



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"I" is always Capitals ... Please remember that... ALways... SUmmer, winter, autumn... I is always in Capitals... Otherwise I loved the writing in this poem. The last line would need to be reworked I guess.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Alka

11 Months Ago

Yes of course "I" is always capital.. this was an error.. thanks :-)

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Alka
Alka

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Hi I am a dreamer and I live in Mumbai .. in search of life and what it stands for.. am here to share some of my work and get honest opinions on them as well as make friends with like minded peopl.. more..

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