In Front Of My Window

Short poem

In front of my window

Creative writing
in a stream of conscienceness
Dreams, creating
a life of happiness
Happy go lucky
every day that passes by
Life can be funny
blogging
reading
The world passes me by

In front of my window

Reviews

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This is a very short poem, but it is very beautiful and meaningful. At times it does seem as if the world passes us by while we are enjoying the power of our imaginations.

The only thing that I might point out, is that in poetry, if you start out with a sentence and the first word is capitalized, then the first word of each sentence should be capitalized. It's also true for the opposite as well. If the first word of the first sentence is lowercase, then all the first words in the sentence should be lowercase.

Just something I thought I would point out. It is there if you would like to use it, or not.

Thank you for sharing.

[taytay]

:) i loves it :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

This reminds me of a butterfly that flew by a window I was gazing out of one day. I believe he was shopping for a lily, but none could be found. How extraordinary, that he flew my way, so that I could immortalize him in a poem! If he only knew...

I hope to read more of you! Welcome to the Cafe!