I am ...

English translation of my Dutch original ...

 

I am …

 

The white raven

Hermit in it’s shell

Unique in the hermit’s world

 

Yet crying out:

‘Hell I am so lonely’

 

A one off piece

Remaining misunderstood

In the (shell)ter

 

Creepy crawly craziness

In my shelter, shell, hideout

I am the white raven desiring

To become black.

Author's Note

I wrote the original Dutch version when I was ... 15.
Therefore no ratings...

Reviews

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

:) Nice! You wrote this at age 15? :) It's really good. I am using a pseudonym of Ulisigi Wa Ya, one of my MPD's to post stories him and I wrote back in 1999. :) I was in 3rd grade and I stumbled over the hand written copies today. So I too the time tonight to post them. You can find him under the @ http://www.writerscafe.org/Ulisigi%20Wa%20Ya.

Thank you for sharing this D. H. ;)

[Enigma]

Wow! That was amazing.. Being the odd one out and being misunderstood can truly be painful as everyone in the world is more or less striving for acceptance. To bring out the whole picture using a short (and well written, obviously) story about a white raven was...amazing! And you came up with the very idea at the age of 15...bravo!
I loved it!! :)