The writing was on a glance!

Of a crowded room, busy

in she walked, contact,

flowing in dress, beauty.

Spotting her, sexy

she noticed me, tall

Our eyes drawn

I caught her.

Through my eyes

she saw desire

In the gleam of her eyes 

I saw " I Want!"

After our initial combat

I whispered " This is a hold-up!"

                 " Drop everything, real slow!"

She did.

I can't tell any-more

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Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I bet she fell for whatever you held against her, huh? ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Thank you Kelly. Yes but alas its only fiction!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...I knew that...really! ; )

[andrew mitchell]

lol...... haha love the come back:):):)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm quick. I can turn off the light and be in bed before the room gets dark! ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Quick Draw Mcgraw! Speedy Gonzales hareeba hareeba!

[Sami Khalil]

I'm laughing so hard. You are so funny and creative...:)............

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet, Sami for your laugh. that's a big compliment!:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[B]

Its all there
I guess that one is sticking around

[andrew mitchell]

Depends how Sticky lol

[B]

like glue lol

[....................]

haha...thankfully there are loop holes in the writing and the savvy 'love lawyer' can fill in the missing pieces... this is brilliant, my friend... :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet, just a bit of fun, I wouldn't date a lawyer lol No Way!