The blindsided chill.

The blindsided chill.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The chill 
from not knowing
was rewarded
by the shivers knowing
the very, very cold
was now entering you.

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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oooooooooooooooo that is so spooky to me!! i love it! so few words in mystery and death ...sharp long stiletto knives and the cruelest of a lover's goodbye, cold kiss ;) inspiring for me! love it!
E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Atmospheric and moody. Excellent.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Sounds like a back to back disagreement between lovers ... nicely penned! :-)

Posted 10 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Months Ago

you may be on the money! lol thanks for reading and for your words.

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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