A self absorbed encounter.

Many a thought

were lost on you

as were those

that were yours

absorbed in self.

One could only drown

in your spongiotic vanity;

the self accumulation of ego mania

spread in praise all over yourself.

My thoughts peeled

on the removal of your makeup

as did my eyes cry

on your onion rings.

I was no match for your ego

but then again....

you didn't scratch mine.

Reviews

[B]

It's sad when you love someone that can't see past their own nose. It's like do they love you or are they loving the idea of being admired and loved at your expense!!! You feel lost and hungry yet you are occupied. Sucks. Really good one Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you lingering soul for your kind review and happy festive season to you and yours

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...others may have too much ego and show it...we keep ours hidden and abide theirs---

[andrew mitchell]

Yes, thank you Jacob

[Einstein Noodle]

this is just too good sir! one to store away to send that certain someone on a rainy day ..
"as did my eyes cry
on your onion rings." absolutely love it ... short, smart and kept it real sir...again ;)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

THAnk you for your kind review E