When the anger within paints those walls!

A simmer here,

a simmer there

was all that was needed

on thoughts reaching boiling

condensating on the walls of ideas

in a mind that needed 

cooling in the frustration.

Reviews

[θεά]

But do minds cool when they need to? And isn't a little anger necessary for the fire in the belly to keep running?
Well these are questions we will never stop asking, and your short succinct poem does the same. As always sharp piece of writing Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Mallika you are too kind and many warm thanks for dropping by and commenting.

[θεά ]

A pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

Anger is like a time-bomb. If we allow anger to paint the walls. No-one shall win. Thank you Andrew for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John, how true indeed!

[Coyote Poetry]

A worthwhile poem and you are welcome Andrew.

[Kelly Scheppers]

There is a method to your madness, and I think its beginning to wear off on me. Stay tuned...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kelly for Gracing my page!