Within who’s space!

Bound for infinity

was no more

the noose that tightened

on one’s longevity

where life hung

in the balance with time.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this but wanted to have "hung in the balance"
---"Hanged" is a bit awkward rolling off the tongue...

but it is true...life hangs in the balance each day.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Jacob I am not one for proper grammar lol as John the Scot always gave me hints and corrected my works so I thank you for correcting my poor grammar, much appreciated. Cheers Andrew

[Sami Khalil]

"Bound for infinity
was no more
the noose that tightened
on one’s longevity
where life hanged
in the balance with time."

[Sami Khalil]

Very deep and philosophical. I like as ever your writings of wit, life, and philosophy.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami for having a moment to bring a smile to my page,😀

[Sami Khalil]

Always a pleasure. You are welcome.