separation

This poems describes the restlessness of a lover while waiting for its love.

At the moment of separation,
Thee vowed in the midst of stars,
holding in fists silent breezes,
bedewing thy eyes with tiny dews,
to meet again in moonlit night,
to touch me like moonbeam,
and to never separate again my love,
I looked the way u moved not wincing for hours,
and felt ur aroma for many coming nights my love,
u know when moonlight came again,
I sat under open sky for whole night,
to feel ur touch in moonbeams my love,
and the nights when there was no moon,
I painted countless moons my love,
doesn't twinkling stars remind u of ur vows,
and flowing breezes touch ur soul,
u come or don't come my love,
I will wait for u whole life my love,
I will paint for u whole life my love.

Reviews

[tuvi]

wow ..... this is very nice poem ...
good effort on the write up .... I like the way separation has been projected out here and also the way u closed the poem ... its really serene

Cheers!
Tuvi