invisible woman

invisible woman

A Poem by ashkat


Rejection! Rejection at every turn!


Not a single action


Followed by a thank you


                                A well done


I am invisible


                                Unneeded


If I slide into that shadow there


It will swallow me whole


And you won’t notice my absence


Long enough to think even of dancing on my grave



© 2018 ashkat



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hey, i'm not gonna lie, you might be my favorite writer here. this is short but so powerful, and you used the simplest language! the spacing almost works like punctuation. i love how "i am invisible" is right in the middle of the poem and it sticks out perfectly. nice title, too, it makes feminist criticism possible (i don't know why i thought of that). love it!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ashkat

3 Weeks Ago

well, I'm not sure what to say! thank you so much - we are basically fan-girling each other here are.. read more
redalia

3 Weeks Ago

seems like we do!
i do think it might be internalized misogyny, especially if you are really.. read more



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hey, i'm not gonna lie, you might be my favorite writer here. this is short but so powerful, and you used the simplest language! the spacing almost works like punctuation. i love how "i am invisible" is right in the middle of the poem and it sticks out perfectly. nice title, too, it makes feminist criticism possible (i don't know why i thought of that). love it!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ashkat

3 Weeks Ago

well, I'm not sure what to say! thank you so much - we are basically fan-girling each other here are.. read more
redalia

3 Weeks Ago

seems like we do!
i do think it might be internalized misogyny, especially if you are really.. read more

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ashkat
ashkat

United Kingdom



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